What would it be?

[shadofreak]

[nadjazk]

thanks 4 replying guys it means a lot to me oh yeah and shannen

[nadjazk]

[thefifthsister]

Okay, so a few days ago (maybe a week ) I posted a message saying that this thread gave me the idea for a song. So I started thinking about what had been said, how we'd react to seeing Shannen and I came up with a story.

First of all a fan (this song can be from anyones point of view) sees their idol in the street but doesnt notice them and missed out on meeting them. Later in the week they are in a shop and see them again but are too stunned to say anything and miss their chance again. Another week later they see them in a restaurant and finally have the guts to say something.

This never actually happened, I just sat and thought about a story and what would go through my head if I met Shannen. This is written from my perspective as a Shannen fan and is for all you Shannen fans but anyone can relate to it.

Couldn't have wrote it without you so thanks! Please let me know what you think. Any advice is welcome. Just gotta write the music to go with now....

[thefifthsister]

Here it is..... (read bit above. Sorry I didn't write it in one message but it wouldn't let me)

Brush

I was walking down the street
Was too busy looking at my feet
To notice you walk by

Then someone shouted out your name
I looked around in vain
And I wanted to cry

I missed my chance
To tell you what you mean to me
I missed my chance
To tell you all you'd done for me
Well what can I say?
Feel like a fool today
Let my chance get away

I was shopping in a store
Hadn't been in there before
Above a shelf I see your face

All I could do was stand and stare
Tried to talk but no sound was there
You smiled at me and I froze in place

I missed my chance
I could only mumble
I missed my chance
Only stutter and stumble
What can I say?
Feel like a fool today
Let my chance get away

After you've gone
I see where I went wrong
Have the perfect message in my head
But when you're there my brain goes dead
I love your work
Your quirky smirk
You've had it hard
But you've come far
Just one more thing to say
I hope it makes your day
Fan through and through
Don't change, just be you

A week or so later
In a restaurant tipping a waiter
I stopped to talk to you

Said all I could
You gave me a hug
Your smile grateful and true

What can I say?
Feeling great today
Cause I didn't let it get away

What can I say?
Feeling great today
Won't let the memory slip away


Thanks for reading!

[nadjazk]

[thefifthsister]

[thefifthsister]

Please read the song I wrote for Shannen and all the Shannen fans!

[laurababe1988]

luv the song its really good ur very talented