Do you realize Lindsay, that in EVERY post of Haylie's was,
" I want more" " I want more" I have noticed that in my story and yours...come to think of it, it was rather annoying back than. Its like she doesn't comment on its nice, beautiful...just I want to be in it, or more, more.
I'm thinking for redoing my story...The one that part 2 went missing...and take out Matt and Haylie all together..and well, Keep Kate or take her out?
What do you think, Sis?
Your writing buddy,
Kristin Marie