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The Dream Within A Dream~ Meeting Shannen!

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:39 pm
by Kristin Marie
Do you realize Lindsay, that in EVERY post of Haylie's was,
" I want more" " I want more" I have noticed that in my story and yours...come to think of it, it was rather annoying back than. Its like she doesn't comment on its nice, beautiful...just I want to be in it, or more, more.

I'm thinking for redoing my story...The one that part 2 went missing...and take out Matt and Haylie all together..and well, Keep Kate or take her out?

What do you think, Sis?

Your writing buddy,

Kristin Marie


The Dream Within A Dream~ Meeting Shannen!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:14 am
by Linz
I think that sounds like a good idea if you want to do that! I need to probably go back into this story and edit some of the people out and have it focus more on Dianna!!! I think I am going to do that!! LOL!

Lindsay

The Dream Within A Dream~ Meeting Shannen!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:17 am
by Kristin Marie
sounds like a plan, Sis. Seems like we are both doing some redoing with our stories

Kristin Marie

The Dream Within A Dream~ Meeting Shannen!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:24 am
by Linz
Yes, I agree!! But they definitely need some re-doing. LOL. Mine do anyway, because I was so young when I wrote them and I am in my mid-twenties now so... I think they need to be re-vamped and matured a little bit. LOL!

Re: The Dream Within A Dream~ Meeting Shannen!

PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 6:16 pm
by Linz
Definitely need to re-vamp this story a little bit~ lol. I am so much more mature now than I was back then lol.