An excerpt from my book.

[pfunk]

The following is an excerpt from a book I wrote and am currently trying to get published. It's not exactly fan-fiction but I didn't know where else to put it. I'd like everyone's honest opinion if I should bother spending money to get myself published. Thanks in advance.



Brave Enough
are you brave enough
to folow
your heart
blindly
without a question
let it guide you
no matter what
i'm not
but
the lonliness
i feel
is greater
then any pain
that i could
feel
some say
the best part of
love
is falling in love
i've fallen
so many times
mostly
in my mind
to help
ease this
lonliness
i feel this
large hole
inside me
limitless
i don't think
i'll ever meet
the woman
who can fill it
but
i have to try
this lonliness
is what i fear more


This goes along with fear, fear is the great motivator.
Bravery is an illusion, made up of different people's fears.

[malou]

Very nice.. I like it!

[prueprue]

i like it too i think its great