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[prueprue]

"erm, prue are you sure your ready, i mean just yesterday you wouldn't even come out of your room and now you want to go see andys grave."
"piper please.......just leave it" said prue while getting up. she grab her keys and jacket and headed out the door.
"hey prue, i'm sorry, i didn't mean it like that" "prue" shouted piper.
"piper maybe we should let her go, it might help her greve" said phoebe
"or not, phoebe you should have seen her yesterday, because i saw what she was like and that scared me like hell. what if seeing andy's grave makes it worse."
"piper, she will be ok, now if were going to go with her i think we should go now and follow her."
"yea, ok, i just hope she's ok."
"yea me too but dont worry shes a strong person she'll find away to move on."
"ok, come on we need to catch up with her." said piper while grabing her car keys and running out the door, with phoebe close behind.

prue had just got to the grave yard. she started to walk though the graves untill she reached his grave. prue then collasped to the floor in tears.
"i'm so sorry......."
prue kepted repeating thoses words over and over again.prue sat there for what semmed like ages she cryed untill she couldnt cry any more, she felt like her heart had spilt in two.

"ok, i cant take this any more" said piper
"piper come on you need to let her greive."
"shes not grieving phoebe, shes just blaming it on herself. im going to talk to her." with that piper walked off over to prue.
"prue come on you need to go you've been sat here for ages."said piper. prue didnt hear her and kepted saying i'm sorry while rocking back and forth.
"prue!!"shouted piper " it wasnt your fault stop blaming yourself."
"piper go away."
"no, prue, i'm sick of this you need to stop blaming your self and move on."
"how can you say that, this is all my fault hes dead because of me."
"no, prue it wasn't your fault and you know what i'm calling leo, he can orb you back home."
"no please."
"leo, leo......LEO!!"

[ShanniHollyMarie]

Its very good! Cept u have teh ages wrong tho. If Prue was 17, Piper wold be 14 and Phoebe wouild be 12. But other then that- GREAT JOB!

[prueprue]

[Prudence#1]

It is a great story.