Beverly Hills 90210 again (part 1)

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Beverly Hills 90210 again (part 1)

Postby Prudence#1 » Wed Jul 07, 2004 6:01 pm

Will they find their way back to eatchother again?

It has no gone 8 years sense Donna and David got married they got a kid Dana who is 8 years old. Steve and Janet has separated. Kelly and Dylan got engaged and has setteld a date for their wedding everything semse to be fine till one day a person they havnt seen in a long time show up with a big surprise.

It was a normal day they thaugt. The gang hanged out at The Peach Pit after dark. They realacsed before the party tonight it was to celebrate Kelly and Dylans engagment. Andrea is back to celebrate the engagment and to go to the Wedding. Brandon stayed in Beverly Hills after Donna and Davids wedding and started to work for the "Beat" again. Steve, Donna, David,Andrea, Valerie,Kelly and Dylan went home to their houses and get ready for the Party . The gang arive to The Peach Pit after dark. They have a wonderful time they talk and the laugh and just when David go up to hold a speach a person walk trough the door someone who looks like.... every body just looks at her. They think it is Brenda till Clare walks in to the room.

Clare: Belinda he is not here

Belinda: Clare he is here and i need to talk to uncle
Brandon

Clare: Okej go to Brandon now. Hurry

Belinda: Yes i will hurry

Steve walks right ahead Clare.

Steve: Hey! Clare how are you doing?
Clare:im fine how are you?

Steve: Im okej. So did you change your mind about coming here? And who is that girl you are with she looks like Brenda.

Clare: No wonder she looks like Brenda Steve she is Brendas daugther.

Steve: What?? Daugther ?? Brenda has no daugther.

Clare: Yes she has Steve she has not told anyone exept Brandon and her parent beacuse Belindas father didnt want anyone to know about her. Im taking care of Belinda beacuse Brenda is in the hostpital.

Donna hears what Clare say and walk right over to her.

Donna: What is Brenda in a hostpital why? why hasnt anyone told ous about this?

Clare: Beacuse Brenda was in Scottland and we were here and waited for Brenda to come. And we wanted to tell Brandon first so he can go with ous. Brenda fainted and she is in a coma.

Clare starts to cry Donna to

Clare: What if she die?

Donna: I go and get the others and we go to the hostpital. Brenda will not die she is a fighter she will hang on.

While she comforts Clare

Belinda still looking for Brandon when she finally see him
she rushes to him and starts to cry.

Belinda: Uncle Brandon you have to go with ous mom is sick and she is in a coma she is on a hostpital in Scottland.

Brandon: Omg she will be fine. Your mom is a figther she is strong she will make it.

Brandon tryes to stay strong for Belinda but inside he is falling apart.

Everybody sitting on the plain to Scottland to go and see Brenda.

On the hostpital everybody waiting for the doctor to come out and tell them if there are any news.

The doctor come out from Brendas room

Everybody: How is she?

Doc: She is still in coma and we do think that she will wake up from the coma. Brenda is very stressed she need to take it easy our otherwise she may end up in a coma again and then im not shure if she will ever wake up.

Everybody: But she will be okej?

Doc: Yes she will. We think she will wake up from the coma.

Belinda: Can we see her? can i see her? Im her daugther

Doc: Okey! But just to at the time

Belinda and Brandon go first.

Belinda: Mom please you have to wake up i need you. We need you.

Brandon: Hello sis! It has been a while i couldnt imagine that the next time that i would see you were in a hostpital. Please sis! We need you wake up everybody is here and waiting for you. Donna, Kelly, Clare, Valerie, Steve, Andrea, David, me, Dylan and Belinda. We all need you. Whe want to hear your jokes, your laugh, your voice and your wonderful smile. And we want to hear your chear up words when we are down.

Right in that moment Brenda moves her fingers she starting to wake up.

Brandon Call the doctor

The doctor come running in sow does the others to.

Belinda:Hey
mom we were very worried about you.

Brenda: Im fine now when you guys are here


To be Continued...

I will whrigth part 2 later if anyone wants to hear it.
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Beverly Hills 90210 again (part 1)

Postby Prudence#1 » Thu Jul 08, 2004 2:06 pm

This is my first fanfic and i know it is not so good but i thinked about wrighting this for a long time.

If you want to hear part 2 please tell me beacuse otherwise i will mot wright the other parts.
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Postby prue4life » Fri Jul 09, 2004 6:19 pm

No I thinks it´s very good. This is a very differnet plot from the brenda fan fictions that I have read so it makes it very interesting Image
I would love it if you maybe could decribe how the gang are feeling about this situation, espassily Dylan and Kelly. Maybe Kelly is worried about losing Dylan to Brenda again? (well she should be but that´s not the point lol)
Anyway, I really hope you will continue with you story Image
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Beverly Hills 90210 again (part 1)

Postby Prudence#1 » Sat Jul 10, 2004 10:07 am

Okey! I will thanks for the ideas i really like them. Maybe i whrigt them in the story.
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Postby Prudence#1 » Wed Aug 04, 2004 7:21 pm

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Postby loveshannen4 » Thu Aug 19, 2004 6:46 pm

it's really great Image keep on!
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