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Brainwashed

Postby malou » Mon Sep 06, 2004 12:17 pm

here we go:

15 minutes later:

Prue and Piper are done, mixing the potion.
“I have a really hard time doing this, Prue.”
“I know honey… But we want Phoebe back more then anything, right?”
“Yeah… we do.” Piper looked over at her baby sister. Her face where now totally pail… Blood was still dripping form her chest. She looked awful.
Piper felt sick.
“Okay, are you ready?” Prue looked at the potion, then at Piper.
“Yeah… I guess I am.”
“Okay, lets go down stairs, and get this over with…” Prue took Pipers hand, and they went down stairs.
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Postby malou » Mon Sep 06, 2004 12:18 pm

“Okay, we have figured out a way to bring Phoebe back,” Prue looked at Andy, “we have to kill Mike.”
“What? That can’t be that way to do it…” Andy said.
“It is, Andy… I’m sorry. But as witches, Piper and I have to do some difficult things sometimes. This is difficult. But we have to bring Phoebe back. No just for our sake, but for the worlds too.” Prue looked at Leo. Leo then looked at Piper. They where ready.
Piper and Prue took a potion each, and walk towards Mike.
“You know Phoebe is going to kill us, when she discovers that we have killed the man she loves.” Piper said, trying to smile through tears.
Prue smiled, tears where streaming down her face, after this was over they where going to have their baby sister back…
Prue grabbed Pipers hand, “We can do this… You can do this”
Piper took a deep breath, and lifted her hand, and aimed at Mike, “Lets do this Prue… Lets get Phoebe back!”
Prue took her hand and raised it, and aimed at Mike… She looked at Piper, and Piper looked back. Then with force, they though the potion at Mike. When the potion hit him, he screamed. Piper broke down, in Prues arms. They held each other, and sobbed.
Andy and Leo looked at them with tears in their eyes.
“Phoebe!” Piper said, and got up and ran up stairs.
Prue ran after her.
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Postby malou » Mon Sep 06, 2004 12:19 pm

When they mad it to the attic, they saw that Phoebe had had the color back into her cheeks.
“Leo hurry! She needs healing!” Piper jelled.
Leo rushed up stairs, and walked over to Phoebe. Then he healed her.
Prue started crying and so did Piper. They joined hands, and walk over to Phoebe.
Then they took her hand, and a bright white light, started shinning. Then Phoebe woke up.
“Phoebe!!” Prue and Piper said. Then they hugged her. Tears where streaming down all of their faces.
“I love you guys” Phoebe said.
“We love you too, honey” Piper and Prue said, “You have no idea.”
They were all sobbing were hard.
Leo and Andy walked towards them, and gave Phoebe a big hug.
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Postby malou » Mon Sep 06, 2004 12:20 pm

A few minutes later:

They were all sitting down stairs in the living room, talking.
“You see, honey, that was why we had to kill Mike… I’m sorry” Prue had explained it all to Phoebe.
Phoebe looked at Prue, then Piper. Then she gave them both a kiss on the cheek,
“Thanks you… and I’m sorry.” She said.
Piper and Prue looked at each other…
“What are you sorry for?” Piper said.
“I was never in love with Mike… I knew something was wrong with him. I knew you guys where right. I just didn’t want you to be right. You see, everytime, I finde someone… there is always something wrong with them. And then I look at you two. You have Andy, Prue… and you Piper, you have Leo… I just want a Andy or Leo my self.” Phoebe’s eyes were filled with water.
“Oh, sweetie, we had no idea…” Piper said, and hugged Phoebe.
“We are sorry.” Prue looked at Phoebe and took her hand.
“I know you guys are… It’s not you fault. I just need to find a man. But form now on I need to listen to what you are saying, and be more careful.” Phoebe took both their hands. And they all hugged.

…

“I’m really hungry… “ Suddenly Phoebe said.
Prue and Piper laughed.
“Come on, I’ll make us all something to eat.” Piper said, and went for the kitchen.
Prue follow her, “Yay, Pipers cooking…”
Phoebe looked at her two big sisters.
“What?” Piper said, with a smile.
Prue turned around.
“Nothing,” Phoebe said, “It’s just… I love you guys.”
“We love you too honey!”

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Postby prueprue » Mon Sep 06, 2004 5:39 pm

i think your story is great, and your english is really good too Image Image
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Postby malou » Mon Sep 06, 2004 7:10 pm

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Postby malou » Mon Oct 04, 2004 7:29 pm

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Postby honda200 » Tue Mar 29, 2005 6:56 am

Hay awesome story ,if ive said it ones, twice, now im going for number three Mr Aaron Spelling should fire all the wrighters at of charmed and hire you guys here now that was some ...edge of your seat story telling wow, allthough i did wonder how they could do spells and vangquish without the power of three ,but hey details, details .Jean(honda200)
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