My songs

[thefifthsister]

So, I said in a thread before that you all inspired me to write a song. We where talking about how we'd react if we met Shannen and what we'd say to her.

Well I wrote a song based on a story that I came up with because of the thread. It's a song for Shannen and for all her fans!

I've also just started writing a song with a double meaning. It's about Charmed and it is also about the struggles we face in life and having friends/family to help us through it.

I just wanted to run the chorus (or possibly verse, not sure yet) by you!

Really it's about Charmed but I don't want to look to dorky to those who don't appreciate Charmed

I keep on fighting
I won't go into hiding
Just as long as you're there
When I need
Together we face it all
Stand together tall
Cause there's nothing we can't face
I'm Charmed indeed


Oh the Charmed ones. I love writing from their point of view

Let me know what you think and please check out the other song, it's called Brush. Or if you want me to post the lyrics here just say

*hugs*

xoxoxo

[shannifan]

WOW!!! Nice text, it´s great!!!

[thefifthsister]

Thank you.....

writing it from the point of view of Prue and Piper, but you wouldn't know cause it applies to all the sisters I think!

So I got the first bit done! Remember it's a work in progress!

Charmed Indeed

It's a sunny day
And all my cares have gone away
I don't know what the day has in store
But it'll be great I'm sure
What's that coming from the attic?
Demons invading my personal space
There's another one at it
But it's a horror I know I can face

I keep on fighting
I won't go into hiding
Just as long as you're there
When I need
Together we face it all
Stand together tall
Cause there's nothing we can't face
I'm Charmed indeed

Hmm. I don't know so far. It will probably undergo many changes, I'm a perfectionist when it comes to lyrics!

What do you think?

[shannifan]

Yeah. It is a very nice idea! You made it good! And I love everything in that charmed plays a role, and I love your text so much, it is so nice!!!
You are very talented, too, and don´t deny it: it´s the truth!!!
love

[paulinepl]

Amazing and wonderful! I surely love it! Are you going to make a melody to this lyrics?

Hugs

[thefifthsister]

Aww thanks you two! I'm hoping to use it as a song, if it ends up sounding good

*hugs*

xoxoxo

[Kinia]

WOW!! you`re realy talented!! Gratulations!

[thefifthsister]

Thank you.

I'm just trying to decide what the second verse is going to be about. I got a guitar part written so I'm gonna try out what I got so far with that.

Oh it's exciting!

Modified.....


Update with the lyrics!

So I haven't got the second verse, break or last verse done but I have just written the last chorus or outro. I just have to now decide on the story between the start and end. That's the difficult part now

Well here's the end for you

And when the fightings done
We go out and have some fun
It's comforting to know
You're still by my side when I need
Let my worries drift away
Cause at the end of the day
I've got you
I'm Charmed indeed

[shannifan]

Wow, perfect ending! As we wrote before: Amazing and fantastic you talented song writer!!!
take care kiss

[thefifthsister]

Thank you!

Just gotta do the middle now

*hugs*

xoxoxo