Awesome ending!!! I really enjoyed reading this story, Chuckles you're such a talented writer. Thanks for letting me be an editor.
The reason yours is shorter is because it's meant to be just like an episode, whereas mine, Lauren's and Claire's aren't necessarily written that way, fitting everything into an hour time slot. So it's not a bad thing.
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