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Postby lilmisshalliwell » Sun Nov 06, 2011 9:22 pm

awww, MORE pretty please *flutters eyelashes*
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Postby PrudenceGemini » Sun Nov 06, 2011 9:41 pm

Aw, cuz you asked so nicely okay :lol:
I'll try put some more on tonight but i gotta study for gcse retakes :?
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Postby sourgummycandy » Tue Nov 08, 2011 3:02 am

oh my god! i cant wait to read about their date! be sure andy takes care of prue. okay? i want them a little corny. :D post ssooooooooooonnn plssss... :))
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Re: My first ever Fanfic - Hope you like it.

Postby PrudenceGemini » Tue Nov 08, 2011 7:12 am

Of course Andy takes care of Prue :lol:
And it is totally corny so don't worry :D there date goes very well no demons attack them either :)
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Re: My first ever Fanfic - Hope you like it.

Postby PrudenceGemini » Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:53 pm

Chapter 14

Two hours later and Prue was almost ready, she was just finishing her make-up and putting on her perfume when the doorbell rang. Prue frowned at herself in the mirror.
"Half hour early?" she said to herself. She heard the door open and Andy's voice then she heard Piper call upstairs.
"Prue, Andy's here."
"Okay just coming." she retouched her lipstick, grabbed her purse, and walked downstairs. Andy watched her as she came down, he was mesmerized.
"Wow!" he breathed.
"Andy, you're a half hour early." she scolded him.
"I know, but i couldn't wait to see you." he confessed. Prue's expression softened.
"I'll let you off just this once." she joked.
"Are you ready to go?" he asked.
"Sure, i'll just grab my jacket." she went back upstairs and Andy turned to Piper and Phoebe.
"How has she been?"
"Fine," Phoebe replied, "A little pissy because we won't let her have coffee, but i did make her promise to take it a bit easier then she has been."
"Good." he said as Prue came back downstairs.
"Shall we go then." Prue said.
"Sure, my car's right outside."
"Okay, see you later." Prue said to her sisters, then Andy put his arm around her and led her to his car. Piper and Phoebe stood in the doorway and waved goodbye to them, then closed it and went to do whatever it is they usually did of a night.
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Re: My first ever Fanfic - Hope you like it.

Postby lilmisshalliwell » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:10 am

Awwww blesssss.....don't they make a LOVELY couple hehehe, Prue is so lucky to have a guy like Andy.... And I love that Piper and Phoebe are looking after her :) MORE please *flutters eyes* :alljump:
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Postby sourgummycandy » Sat Nov 12, 2011 5:31 am

wow! i can't get enough of them! pls post more chapters... :))
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Re: My first ever Fanfic - Hope you like it.

Postby PrudenceGemini » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:49 am

Don't worry there's still more of this chapter to come and the rest of it is Prue and Andy's date :D
Which i think you'll like :lol:
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Re: My first ever Fanfic - Hope you like it.

Postby PrudenceGemini » Sat Nov 12, 2011 4:30 pm

Chapter 14 Part 2

"So Andy, where are you taking me?"
"It's a surprise." he replied. Prue moaned.
"Ohh, you know how much i hate surprises." Andy smiled confidently.
"I think you'll like this surprise, don't worry."
"Alright." she sighed. She looked at him, she thought he looked so handsome tonight, he was wearing his favorite suit and the tie she had bought him a while back.
"So how was work today?" she asked him.
"It was okay, we're working on a massive case right now, but nothing for you to worry about. So how was your day?" he asked.
"Boring as hell, me and Phoebe just sat watching T.V. and then we had a bit of a fight, but nothing for you to worry about." they grinned at eachother and Prue looked out the window. They sat like that for a few minutes then they pulled up outside the restaurant. Andy got out of the car, walked around, and opened the door for Prue who took his hand and got out of the car. She looked at the restaurant amd gasped.
"Oh Andy...."
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Re: My first ever Fanfic - Hope you like it.

Postby lilmisshalliwell » Sat Nov 12, 2011 7:35 pm

heyyyyyyy why end it like that, more, please :)
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