here's my new fan fic well it's the same one but i fixed it let me know if this is much better.
One day Piper and Phoebe and Pru decide to take a camping trip to try to get away from all the evil they had to fight to try at least have a normal life a normal vacation at least try too. They all agree that they all have to bring a date with them. Piper dared Pru to ask Andy n Pru dare Piper to ask Leo n then Pru n Piper dare Phoebe to bring Cole.
I dare you to bring Andy, Piper said to Pru,
Well I dare you to ask Leo, Pru said to Piper,
Ight I will, Piper said to Pru,
I will ask Andy too, Pru said to Piper,
Who am I suppose to ask? asked Phoebe,
Piper and Pru looked at eachother to come up with an idea.
Well why not ask Cole, said Piper,
Yeah ask Cole said Pru,
We dare you said Piper and Pru,
Ight your on said Phoebe,
While they start to pack for the trip Phoebe had a question to ask Pru and Piper.
You guys are you sure we can go on this vacation? I mean with all these warlocks after us trying to get our powers should we even be leaving the house for a vacation? asked Phoebe,
then Piper said it's just for the weekend Phoebe for a few days, I think we can enjoy at least one vacation with or without the warlocks, I think we can pull this off,
Yeah Phoebe we have to at least try to live some sort of a normal life rather we're witches or not said Pru,
You guys are right we have to at least try said Phoebe,
So Phoebe went back to her room to finish packing for the trip and to think of how to ask Cole to go with her on the trip. Meanwhile Piper was thinking of how to ask Leo and Pru was thinking of how to ask Andy to go with them on the trip. They were also thinking if they would go with them on the trip. They were all worried about if the warlocks would try to ruin the trip in some way but they all hope it wouldn't come to that. If it did then Andy would know that they have powers and Pru doesn't want Andy to find out that way she wants to tell him in her own way and at the right time.
let me know if i fixed it n if this is much better n i'm gonna fix my other ones n make somemore but in the meantime let me know if this is much better n thank you